Thursday, July 1, 2010

On the HILL TOP


Clouds are flying atop
like froth on the soap
Gushing winds feels like in freezer
the leaves falling down like dagger

Soothing environs full of mountains
trees covering them as if like curtains
Amidst all the chill in the breath
the beauty is taking away all wrath

Ever heard the soaring clouds
its like roar of the big hounds
Silence here is the lyrics of love
wind speaks the lines of dove

The all above gloomy night sky
near as if u could touch by an eye
Feel the heavens from a high
seemingly the end draws nigh

There the morning sun gets out
light and fog cause a big bout
Time to get out of the cosy cot
and enjoy the coffee served hot

4 comments:

Upasana said...

seems u know nature better than itself

Amit said...

WoW!! that was a compliment.. got to be cheered for a long tym.. :)

thnk u.. :)

Wish said...

It was a refreshing read...

But I wud say, it needed a better polish.

Never the less... it set the nature in the midst of some beautiful picturesque substances... like the Froth...[:)]

Keep pennin...

Amit said...

yeah sure dude.. comments like that are most happily welcomed.. n yeah i would never stop penning.. :)

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